Tuesday, March 16, 2021
Filming My Intro Shots (Part 1)
Saturday, March 13, 2021
Music Dilemma + Solutions
Wednesday, March 10, 2021
Some New Hardware For Filming
Tuesday, March 9, 2021
Shot Changes and Troubles With Shooting
I was going to start with the shot changes, but I just changed my mind. I figured I got easily segue into the shot changes because of my experience "filming" (I'll explain why that's in quotations in just a second) and how visiting my planned setting is how I actually thought of my shot changes. So here goes:
Florida is weird. Florida cannot make up its mind about whether it's going to be sunny, or cloudy, or windy on any given day (and sometimes, it changes its mind halfway through the day). I went off on this tangent because Florida randomly decided to be really windy the day I went to my setting to film. This filming was mostly going to be done as prep, as these were going to be the introductory shots that establish the setting. They ended up establishing that Florida is very windy sometimes. I filmed maybe one or two shots before realizing that I would not be able to use these. The surrounding foliage clearly showcases how windy it was, and my actual filming of the characters (which I'm doing soon) is hopefully not going to be on a day as windy (hopefully there will be no wind). The discrepancies between footage is going to be bad, and I want it to be as professional of an amateur film piece as possible.
The footage pretty much looked like this (even though this is a bit of an embellishment)
So, long story short, I did not get the shots I wanted. But, it did lead me to developing some more shots for the introduction and completing my storyboard (I now have pretty much all of the shots picked out).
These are the updated intro shots. Again, I'm not the best at drawing, but I think I did manage to capture what I want out of the shots. Like in many dramedies (and as told by Lulu Wang in one of my other blog posts), there are times when there does not need to be camera movement, the movement of the objects within the shot captures the attention of the audience and makes for a great shot. That's why I wanted to focus my establishing shots on the movement of the waves in the ocean, the breeze gently sweeping past palms and tall grass, and the small movements of the buildings along the beach (many are older, and look more working class but have interesting designs). I also wanted a pan of a bird flying past, but that all depends on if I get a bird to go flying past (I'll just ask my partner to scare some birds, I'm sure he'll be fine with it). This opening sequence is going to last maybe 10-15 seconds (including the shot of Maya or Dallin stomping on the water), so as not to take too much time away. I still think the setting is really important, but I want to be able to focus on my characters as soon as possible.
These are the illustrations of the final shots of the opening. I just wanted to create a smooth transition of them getting into the car, turning on the music (with the song being diegetic at first), before using the sound transition back to the ball floating on the water. I also put the title card there hesitantly (I might have also figured out which font I want for it, but that's going to be decided later). The list at the bottom is so I remember the costumes and the props. I've already mentioned it, but I'm going to be filming soon and I'm really excited, but I also want to be prepared. That's all for now, my next blog will probably be on an exciting piece of equipment I'm getting for filming, so stay tuned.
Saturday, March 6, 2021
More Production Prep
This color scheme keeps the sharper blues, but mutes some of the surrounding greens and tans. This resembles some of the color schemes of other dramedies that like to mute some colors to make others stand out. I don't know what this particular LUT will do to orange, but if it sharpens it and emphasizes it I will seriously consider this one.
Thursday, March 4, 2021
Shooting Schedule and Mise-en-scene Prep
This blogpost is going to be more disorganized in comparison to my other ones. It's more of me trying to get myself organized for the upcoming filming I'm doing for the opening. And I've decided to do my shooting schedule here:
03/07 - filming more of background shots (introductory, some wide shots of ocean); mostly going to use this day to lock in my shot choices (see what works in the area and what doesn't) and final setting prep
03/13 or 03/14 - actual shooting day; will film majority of shots; could be either day. or both depending on the weather
03/20 - could be used as a re-shoot day for any shots that need it
Now that I've gotten the shooting schedule out of the way, I'm moving on to the mine-en-scene preparation. I really want to focus on costumes and props as of right now. I'll start off with costumes.
Of course I'm starting off with the orange shirt. It's an eye-catching color that means I won't need to have to make the background a lower depth of field on the two-shots. I still most likely will, as a lot of dramedies play with the depth of field during two-shots so the characters are more in focus. I'm also toying with the idea that she also has a camouflage jacket. It's another reference to The Clash and their album Combat Rock and will make the character seem even more eccentric. The jacket that I have is more beaten-down and worn, which will be helpful in presenting the characters as more of the working class. I do not want them to have any expensive clothing or items. Again, really need to sell to the audience that they are of the working class. This means the costumes might be more beaten down or worn (especially if it's more workout clothing). I might have some other accessories that add to the characters (like a cool necklace).
Tuesday, March 2, 2021
Full Screenplay and Commentary
I am now finally revealing my screenplay in its entirety. I didn't want the opening scene to have too much dialogue (there's still a good amount, since it's a dramedy and I wanted to set the humorous tone early). I timed it out so that the dialogue takes a little less than a minute. This does not include the cutaways, but I did time it out with some pauses. So here it is (some of my commentary will be between pages):
The first thing you'll notice is a change in the title. I already had the idea of a Clash song playing during the final seconds of the opening scene (the two siblings love the band), so I thought looking through their songs to find a good movie title was my best bet. And I turned out to be right, the song itself has the themes I'm looking for in my movie, with the song (alternatively titled "Stand By Me") being about sticking together through harder times (and one person not standing by the other, hence the lyrics "stand by me, or not at all"). It's a good title and a reference to a Clash song with a lot of meaning. Now, before I go on to comment on some more of my script, I need to address what my target audience is. I'm definitely trying to make it as accessible as possible, with viewers potentially able to relate to the siblings' relationship. But, I do want to zero in on those who are in their later teens to late 20s. This story really is a lot of coming-of-age, with Maya going through her own struggles and figuring out her place in the world. And the wry humor might work well for those in their late teens and all the way through to those in their 60s or 70s. There is not a specific target audience for the wry brand of humor, but it sort of contains one in and of itself. Now, back to the script:
I made sure to add some of that wry humor. I really wanted my dialogue to capture the bond between the two, so I made sure there was some sibling bickering (and by some, I mean the entire thing). I wanted them to each have their own speaking style (though they both are very sarcastic). I made it more colloquial (there is definitely some cursing) and I made sure to add some of the paralinguistic features and prosodic features during their conversation (not sorry for incorporating my AICE Language knowledge into this), but I do want my actors to naturally include some of their own tendencies when speaking. Again, I just want the conversation to be as authentic as possible. And I did take note of the way some of my Midwestern family speaks, and made some corrections according to that (the two siblings are originally from Wisconsin).
I'm happy with how my screenplay turned out. My next step is mine-en-scene planning (mostly props and costuming), and I'll share my final storyboard later on in the week.
The Final Products (!!!!)
After all the hard work that I've put in to my project, I'm pleased to present to you the following components: TRAILERS: - Pleasan...
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After all the hard work that I've put in to my project, I'm pleased to present to you the following components: TRAILERS: - Pleasan...
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I was able to film this time around and get some pretty got shots. I wasn't able to film my entire opening, as both my partner David and...
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I'm not done with the researching phase of the project, but I am already starting the official draft of the story and the shots for my ...

















